Good job on this.
The characters seem really well done, the presentation and pacing is nice, and the art is pretty decent.
I kind of wish I knew this was part of a series before watching it, though. :/
The episode's story doesn't really stand very well on it's own, without any context, even if it is presented well.
Nice! The animation was great, the jokes were funny, and Larry seems like an awesome character.
Can't think of anything negative to say, good job here! :D
This was awesome.
The character design was great, everything moved very fluidly, I loved all the blood & gore, and how sick & twisted the whole thing was.
The one minor thing I could criticize about this is how some of the movements looked like they were moving just slightly too slow. The motion was fine, but the speed just seemed off a tad. (A few examples of this would be the eye-popping animation at 0:07, when the woman gets knocked back at 0:37, or when the dude jumps out of the way of the ball at 1:24). Not sure if the intent was to make them appear as though they were moving in slow motion, but I feel the speed change wasn't drastic enough to convey that, and instead, those moments just appear to be... a tad off.
These are simply a few minor nitpicks in an overall great looking animation, though. Great stuff! Easily 5 stars! :D
Nice!
I loved the style of the humor.
The animation manages to look pretty good, too... even though the drawings themselves are pretty damn sloppy.
The drawings were supposed to be sloppy. I purposely used a thick brush, and I kept changing the smoothing. It's about a dumb detective, and animations about dumb detectives are not supposed to be visually good.
This was great! I love the smoothness of the animation, everything flowed very nicely and had a proper amount of weight to it.
I wish more advertisements were like this.
That was really cute & heartwarming. I liked the animation and the character design, too.
I thought most of the jokes fell kinda flat for whatever reason, though.
Still, good stuff. :)
i can see that. yeah, jokes weren't super strong in this, but it'll get better. thanks for the review!
Those are some large-ass Guinea pigs!
This is awesome, can't wait for the full thing.
Hopefully the full version is shown in a larger window, though... I found the text to be a bit difficult to read, and I'm only running in 1920x1080...
Very cool! I love the visual direction of the whole thing, every camera angle seemed super appropriate and the art design on everything really fit the overall theme of imagination.
The story was simple, but it worked, and I really love the choice of music at the end.
Despite the choice of music, I think some of the sound effects were a bit distracting. That super-realistic helicopter sound seemed out of place, and the cartoon boings & boops just really took me out of the fantastical elements of the the story & visuals. Perhaps some of the sound effects could have been mixed better, as well. You should definitely look into using left & right channel panning, fading, and volume to your advantage.
Some of the motion seemed a bit awkward as well (especially that walk cycle), but that's a minor point, as I feel the movement worked with your choice of art style.
Overall, you do a great job of creating an interesting fantasy world, and it's only somewhat diminished by the audio design. I definitely enjoyed it and i'm definitely interested to see what you do next :)
Creepy, fucked up, and really great!
loved the quality of the animation.
The voice acting reminded me of SexualLobster :)
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