Even not having seen Kill la Kill, I thought this was pretty good. I mean, everything was just super rediculous, and I like how the art accentuated the ridiculousness of it all.
Still, it's not like I laughed out loud to it. Perhaps it would have been funnier if I had seen the show itself, but as it is now, it basically just gave me a bit of a chuckle.
Most of that was through the silly looking character design. The way you re-interpreted the show's character design into a more bombastic cartoony style worked really well, and you gave them some really fantastic looking keyframes, too.
If nothing else, this was a solid production that gave me a few chuckles and got me interested in the rest of your work. :)